Friday, 6 January 2012

More feedback

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I posted my poem ‘I’m Just Sleeping’ onto the Blogger Coffee Shop forum and this is one of the comments it received:

‘Wow I think that’s a beautiful piece. I get the feeling that’s its written by a girl in an abusive relationship that went too far and abused her fatally yet even though he killed her, she still loves him and thinks he cares.’ – John Malo

This poem was infect intended to be about knife crime although I do love it when people interpret my work in different ways!

Let me know your thoughts on this poem!

- Esjae x

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